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The Puppet Becomes The Master by *Kiyosamathebest:iconKiyosamathebest:



Describe this all to me again
The feeling I had enveloped in sin
I did everything to end your tears
And by my side I kept you near

It started as a little game
Back then my feelings were so tame
You believed those silly words I said
Now I sit alone in dread

Screaming inside me "You're such a fool!"
You were only supposed to be be my tool
I've surrendered to you my body and soul
Left with a void, left with a hole

Freak of nature, loved by none
I would've killed you for the fun
Now you laugh at my helpless state
I have to stop you before it's too late

I created a monster out of you
And yet the desire as grown anew
I dug this grave nicely for myself
I made our lives a living hell

Time to take all of the pills
You want to drug me for the thrills
Kill me softly but kill me true
I don't want to be a toy for you

The tables have turned, now I am afraid
Who knew I had filled you with such hate?
I want to finish this right now
I'll turn around and take my final bow

I feel a deep stab in my back
And you had killed me with such little tact
I fall to the ground; I'm staring at you
For once the tears are sadly true

"I love you..." I said with my last breath
One last look and then you left
Tell me this sad little tale again
So I can find a better end
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Author's Comments

SO OLD.

I found the first draft of this poem, which I did in middle school. So I decided to make a final draft two nights ago and tonight I am finally able to put it up.

SO GO AHEAD AND MAKE FUN OF ME, DEARS

And yes, I DO hate myself right now, thank you. XD;;

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:iconschwarzerdrachen:
This poem seems very personal and I feel that I can relate to the frustration over the way things sometimes turn out, sometimes the lack of closure for one person makes it very frustrating >.<

I really like the second stanza's words =]

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:iconschwarzerdrachen:
I mean the third stanza sorry >>=]

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:iconpachipokegrrl:
Whoa. That's REALLY good. I totally had it happening in my head *claps*

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Maybe I'm crazy but if this is a free country, why aren't we permitted to love who we want to love?
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It's a little personal, yes. XXD

Oh really? Well, thank you~

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*bows* Thank you, thank you. I really like this old ass poem, actually. XD

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:iconkiyosamathebest:
I see, okay. XD

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:iconschwarzerdrachen:
Yes I thought so XD =]

And yes, I liked the word choice =)

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:iconschwarzerdrachen:
XD

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:iconpachipokegrrl:
It made me want to draw it like a storybook o.O

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My Cheese is Cold
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~HieixKuramaClub
~bishie-stalker-club
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Maybe I'm crazy but if this is a free country, why aren't we permitted to love who we want to love?
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If you need to talk, even if I don't know you, I'll listen! ^_^

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